oh my god
I can't breathe. That was fucking fantastic.
Very smooth transitions and the voice, oh god the voice.
P.S The only reson im giving this a 10 is beacuase the voice was pretty good. but thats it!
The ridiculous comedy makes up for the not fantastic art, which kind of makes it better anyway.
For your first real go, this is pretty darn good. I lol'd at the end. Keep working at it and you will be a champion in no time. Keep up the good work
Thanks man. Already started on a new one. taking my time and seeing where it goes dude. :]
A good loop
But I think now you can apply your skills to something bigger.
Slow it down a little bit, maybe give it storyline, you know? Even if something lacks in good art or animation, if you can put some funny jokes in or give it some backbone, it could be good. Right now, it's just sort of a mess. Keep workin at it.
Short and to the point. I like it. Keep up the good work.
So, the art was decent, and the audio was good, but I think the joke was a little bit drawn out. Like, the middle just seemed unnecessary. Not bad, though.
I needed to find a way to show that he tried actually getting a prostitute. Besides without the middle it would be pretty short.
That was really hilarious dude. The art wasn't fantastic, but my god that was funny. Keep up the good work!
It was okay
So, it was pretty weird, and you should probably make your voice a little louder in the future. The animating was pretty decent, and it was actually pretty entertaining story wise. Keep up the work, I'm sure over time you will get better. Not bad for your first submission, though.
what the shit
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