For your first real go, this is pretty darn good. I lol'd at the end. Keep working at it and you will be a champion in no time. Keep up the good work
Thanks man. Already started on a new one. taking my time and seeing where it goes dude. :]
So, the art was decent, and the audio was good, but I think the joke was a little bit drawn out. Like, the middle just seemed unnecessary. Not bad, though.
I needed to find a way to show that he tried actually getting a prostitute. Besides without the middle it would be pretty short.
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